I keep thinking about what I emailed
you about the “repugnant” things written about the sister and
brother. I didn’t know there was a name for it (sibling attraction),
and I am glad that you went with it. To me, it shows that your writing is
real and graphic enough to bring things very much to life. I am looking forward
to reading this next book, and the next one, and the next one.
Mary in Lancaster
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Whew!
My heart is palpating. What passionate - eloquent writing! I've never read
anything like these first two books.
Carlsbad Street Fair Visitor
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I
just want to say how much I love your wonderful series of books about Erik,
The Phantom of the Opera, and his life beyond the Opera House. I
read your first book some time ago, then eagerly jumped into book 2, which
I will admit, I put aside for a time because I found the relationship between
Michael and Sarah disturbing. I recently picked the book up again and began
from the beginning with an open mind. I let myself become swept away in the
story and this time, I loved it. I finished reading today and my copy of The
Tale of the Bloodline just arrived today, so I'll be starting it later
tonight or tomorrow. Anyway, keep the story coming! Erik's phans eagerly await!
Elissa
Author’s
response: First, let me compliment you on your strength of character to go
back and rethink something that disturbed you. What disturbs us can often
point the way to areas we need to evaluate within ourselves. I know a woman
who all her life had a disdain for black people. She was raised with the perception.
Now she has a black mechanic working on her car and the butcher she likes
best is black. I try to make people aware of situations, especially ones where
their initial reactions are seemingly ingrained and outside their control.
Michael and Sarah were genetically engineered to react to each other the way
they did, they also paid a terrible price for surrendering to their choices.
A while back a colleague gave me an insight regarding incest. She told me
that sex between siblings is "safe", the participant believes they
can bank on the acceptance and love of their partner. True. Yet things are
rarely that simple, still there does seem to be that component. Anyway, thanks
for going back to The Season of the Witch and enjoying the rest of
the story. Good for you.
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Hello!
I got so lucky this morning - I discovered your 2nd Book on Amazon! I have
read your first book four times now! I did not know it was to be a trilogy.
I am glad I found your site. I have to tell you how I went about finding you,
though. When I found your book on Amazon I read a few of the excerpts. I was
so DEEPLY upset that Erik is cheating on Christine that I couldn't stand it.
I've spent the whole day going nuts and driving my hubby nuts. I even reread
your first book and there is a sentence where Erik says he wouldn't even think
of cheating on Christine-he loves her so much. So I have ordered your second
book, I am thrilled. But I am so bothered that he is cheating on Christine!
That is how involved in your stories I am. You are an incredible writer and
I was thrilled to take the chance on ordering your first book and now cannot
wait to read the second and then the third later this year! Thank you.
Debbie
Author’s
Response: I'm happy to chat in cyberspace with Phantom of the Opera enthusiasts.
That you think I'm an incredible author is a wonderful compliment - I'll try
to keep earning your respect. I am a little confused about the cheating issue
and hope some clarification can dispel the fog. First, let's please acknowledge
that I am not writing teen romances. My characters are adults invested in
complex and unnerving situations. They are driven by strong and compelling
passions. Here's a brief summary of the three books already published:
1.) The Return of the Phantom - Christine believes that she is the
one who has "cheated" on her true spouse, Erik, by entering and
remaining in a sham of a marriage to Raoul. Erik declares his faithful love
because that is exactly how he feels at the time. Please remember he is a
principled sociopath - remorse is a difficult emotion for him to experience.
2.) The Season of the Witch - (longest of my novels.) In section
one, Erik, protects his false identity and the status of aristocrat for his
family by allowing himself to be coerced into a relatively brief relationship
with a noble woman named Pascale. The singular product of that union will
lead to a main character in book # 3. Please be patient as you read - all
things will come together for a purpose and everyone will suffer the consequences
of their choices.
3.) The Tale of the Bloodline - Brings Erik into the current century,
in part because of the mad designs of an award winning geneticist descendent,
and because a character named Julian from book # 2 has insisted the birth
happen. Erik will be unhappy and unfulfilled until Christine returns. She
does.
In response to multiple requests and since my writer's brain refuses to sit
still, I am working on book # 4. So much for a trilogy.
During the process I will try to tease out the mysteries Leroux left for us
to unfold and write what I perceive will be an interesting tale. Let me assure
you that Erik possesses a timeless love for Christine. A similar incident
to what occurred with Pascale will never happen again. But standing back,
I have to say that by briefly partnering with other individuals they did not
truly love, both Erik and Christine learned to value each other all the more.
They've discovered that life is precious and oh so short. If you ever want
your books signed, please let me know and I'll tell you where to send them.
They will be promptly returned to you (usually out again in the next day's
mail).
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Thank
you for your response to my email. I just want to let you know that I posted
a review on Amazon a few minutes ago. I was mostly responding to the one very
negative review that was there. That is a very unfair review in my opinion.
The Review: A Thrilling Tale. I feel the need to reply to the one very harsh
review given to this book. The reviewer complained about the graphic nature
of the story and that it wasn't suitable for young readers. This person apparently
failed to read the disclaimer on the back of the book which states "This
is not a children's book, nor is it intended for the more prudish among our
ranks." That being said, I will admit that the story line is not for
the squeamish or those who have the story of the Phantom of the Opera pigeonholed
into a sappy romance. The negative reviewer also feels that the characters
are portrayed in a way that insults the fans who love the movie version which
starred Gerard Butler. I am a huge fan of both GB and the 2004 movie. I couldn't
disagree more! The characters are completely believable and recognizable from
the movie. More importantly, this book is written in the spirit of the original
novel by Gaston Leroux, in which the important character, The Persian, figures
prominently. And, speaking of Mr. Leroux, he is very cleverly incorporated
in the "Season of the Witch."
Johnnie's Angel
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I
can’t believe you don’t have a big following with your books.
They are so intense and make me think. I go back and reread to see if I missed
anything. I know honestly each time I have reread one of the first two books
I always come across things I didn’t remember. This second book, for
some reason, was filled with so much going on it was necessary for me to read
it many times (which was quite enjoyable!)
Virginia
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You
are brilliant in what you do. I’m such a fan of your first two books
– they are the only books in many years that I’ve read, reread
and reread. I think I’ve reach each book now three times and know I
will reread the second one before I start on the new one. You are the best.
Deb
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This
is definitely a page-turner; the story flows so easily. I felt like I was
there in every scene, the detail is amazing. I could see the rooms and place
myself in them. I had to keep reading, just had to. I kept telling myself,
“I have to go to sleep. No, I’ll just read one more chapter.”
From a medical viewpoint the scenes are mild, you could have written so much
more. Good that you held back for the lay people.
Karen C. in Virgina
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You
make me smile from ear to ear...like a child...who has just been told that
she has done something very nice...for a very nice friend indeed! Many affirmations
about your writing. Your novels draw a natural, beautiful, healthy response
from your readers. You’ve really achieved something. Acclamations should
be sung because you possess the capabilities of penetrating the minds of your
readers with incredibly astonishing words that are put to paper with love
and care. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us, I understand and appreciate
their value. The visions of importance do matter a great deal in our lives
and those important visions should help bring us full circle back into some
semblance of health. Now I can’t wait for the third book, but all good
things come to those who wait! Please keep on writing.
Bread Pudding Lover
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Your
plots are not predictable AT ALL. This second book threw me completely for
a loop, and I like that they’re not predictable! They are unlike any
of the Phantom stories I have read before. I consider both of these novels
a combination of horror/drama.
Anonymous
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What
a great idea to bring Leroux into your story. I admire people who have the
courage to have their thoughts put out for the public to read. People can
be pretty cruel at times, but if you do get any negative information, take
it with a grain of salt. Take from their comments what you think will help
you. Don't let PEOPLE deter you!
Mary C.
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I
am quite intrigued by your books. The first stays so close to the original
works. The second does what it’s supposed to do, the shock value –
the decent side of me felt repugnance and anger toward the children. I reread
the descriptions of the children when you introduced them in the first book.
They seemed to be such lovely, darling, intelligent children. It is a shame
that they had to turn out the way they did. As you see, with your descriptions
I can picture them in real life, since life is the way you depict it. Every
family has their secret skeletons in the closet. Part three explains very
well why Julian went all the way berserk. He was such a sad byproduct of Sarah
and Michael. His first love affair and he muffed it up good. He didn’t
realize his own strength and that if you hold someone precious and tender
and fragile, you don’t squeeze them so hard you break their bones.
Lancaster
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I
just finished reading this book for the third time. It’s like an onion
with its layers; so many subtleties are woven through it. So many human secrets
are revealed by looking deeply into the mirror of another person’s face.
Excellent!
Ben Aaronson in Wisconsin
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I
reread "Season" again...it makes me so happy. I also reread the
original Phantom of the Opera, and two other books written by obscure
writers. They were such disappointments! They basically just followed the
original stories and added tidbits here and there - nothing like your incredible
writing. I honestly can tell you that I can hardly wait for your next book.
I get so involved in your stories and really think on what I have read. I
wish to add my voice to the other readers' comments that I hope you write
more~! I will understand if Erik decides not to divulge any of his secrets
or feelings to you. He is such a private person after all.
Debbie
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I
understand about the oubliette now! Perhaps the fall symbolizes (in a very
oblique way) that this creature of such precision and timing cannot always
have things under his control.
G.S.
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I
have the utmost respect for this author. This book, and the first one, moved
me so much. I just wanted to express how grateful I am and to thank you Etienne
de Mendes. I now have a favorite author and two favorite books about my favorite
subject. Thank you, thank you, thank you!
Spencer’s sister
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When
this author writes...his words grip me. When I open these books, fireworks
fly and sparkling stars appear. You are so talented, Etienne de Mendes. I
am in awe of the strength of your writing. To expose yourself and bare your
soul takes such courage…your fans are flooded with the thoughts pouring
out of your mind. What can I say? I love your books, Etienne de Mendes, and
can’t wait to see what’s next. Yahoo, I am so glad I found these
books!
Delta
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I
found The Season of the Witch an enjoyable book, written by an author of great
talent. I could so picture the mansion and all the settings in the story.
Not obtuse at all. I travel a lot and hate short books. I like books I can
bury my head in for a week or so and this book is like that. My copy sits
big and proud on the bookshelf right beside all my other Phantom books. I’m
looking forward to The Tale of the Bloodline. It sounds fascinating.
A phanatic
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I
just read The Season of the Witch with baited breath and was not disappointed.
What a read! You have to have one of the busiest minds on the planet, Etienne.
It’s a wonder whirling thoughts don’t clutter up your place. These
plots are so organized. Julian’s downfall was so imaginative and creepy.
You must have it “all together” to get all of this across so proficiently.
Thanks for writing these two books, I really appreciate them.
Tessie
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Excellent
book! This book is not for your "typical" reader. You need to read
and then reread this story to grasp all of its content. It is very different
from any other "phantom" story you may read. It is full of everything
- lust, sex, horror, grief, etc. I had read this author's first book and reread
it four more times again. This book made me think and have questions. Luckily,
this author invites questions and ACTUALLY answers them! I am so anxious for
the third book of this series to come out this fall - I loved this book and
admire the author!
Phantom Lover
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No
one could confuse, Etienne de Mendes, the author, with any other author. Your
books are unique, different, and oh so very Phantom. Please pat yourself on
the back, because we, your readers, can't. Look at what you've done...you've
clearly written two unmistably terrific books. I am so glad I had the opportunity
to read all of your work, and I look forward to many more!!! Please, don't
forget your fans. I can't believe we may have the third book by the end of
the year. The more you talk about it, the more I want to read it. And the
sooner I read it, then it will be over and I don't want that either. But it's
so nice to look forward to reading another Phantom story! From a writer's
perspective you must be very organized. You have to have it all together,
or you wouldn't be able to proceed with these wonderful spine-tingling romantic
plots.
Maxie
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I
just finished reading your second book "Season of the Witch". I
read your first book last year and was thrilled when I found this second book
of yours. I love your books - they are so unlike anything I've ever read.
You are one heck of a writer!
Debbie
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Hello,
first may I say I actually screamed this morning when I saw your email! Thank
you so much for taking the time to write back to me. I printed out your email
and put it in my book. I've read your first book four times! Your imagination
is something to be in awe of. I get so caught up in all that is happening
that I don't want to do work or sleep. I finished your second book in less
than a week, so you know I will be rereading that one soon. And I do like
your Christine. She is strong, she takes care of her family and she does not
"need" anyone to take care of her - so different from how many writers
portray her. I am a huge fan and have read and reread your site too many times
to count. I love the other reader's questions and your comments. It helped
me, too! You are incredible!
busydbee
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Another
powerfully absorbing, intelligent, truly original work from a superb writer
with a very unique perspective. Thank you for giving to phantom phans something
we never thought imaginable, something we thought could never happen. First
with 'Return' and then 'Season' and soon 'Bloodline'. We could never be able
to possibly imagine that any author would go beyond Leroux's book in the amazing
ways you have. But, you did! Take pride in your work because we the phans
are proud of you!
A Reader Outside Boston
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So
poetically written. I really enjoy how you portray Erik; he does seem to be
constantly thinking and questioning, which people should do. Ignorance is
not bliss. I know I feel better when I know more and learn more.
M.N.
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Bravo,
you put Leroux right back into the story!
Beverly, California
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De
Mendes managed to accomplish the near impossible. With words he placed the
experience of life down on paper. Everyday we step to the right or the left
and are met with challenges nearly beyond our comprehension – just so
in this book. The characters are faced with decisions that cause miracles
or desolation, undeniable good and bad results come about through their choices
– just as in life. All are held accountable for their decisions and
must live and die with them, hoping all the while that they made the right
choices. Very human hearts, minds, and feelings govern these characters. Seeking
pleasure rules them initially, but as in real life, often pleasure brings
pain. In this book we experience what it is to live, and no one said life
was easy to survive. I will think long and hard about what this book brought
out in me. But rest assured, I adored this novel, especially the sub-plot
about Julian. Never doubt this author, he has a brilliance like no other.
Saul
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If nothing else can be said about this book, it’s that it is never for
one moment got boring. I have so much information in my head about this book
that I have to sit back and go over everything. So many wonderful deep meanings.
It’s like tasting life. Scene after eloquent scene unfolded before my
eyes. I laughed when Michael skidded out of the closet and cried when Julian
and Erik hugged in the cottage. I think the second time I cried was when Julian
so cruelly killed Louisa, and then when the men walked her coffin into the
chapel I had chills. Thanks again, for writing another truly remarkable book.
And boy am I looking forward to getting 'bloodied' with The Tale of the
Bloodline.
Ella,
South Africa
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Well
written and clever, very gratifying. The evil critics are obviously not getting
the message about the substrata of life. Thanks for having the courage to
hit some very raw subjects. They needed to be there so that Erik could deal
with Julian. I’m still cringing.
P.
Rosario
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I
just passed Louisa's murder and Julian's death. I was teary-eyed at the passing
of Madame Giry. If Christine was Erik's soul, then she was definitely his
heart. She was always my favorite character next to Erik. I'm glad Randolph
got what was coming to him. I felt really sad about Sonia and Julian...perhaps
Madeleine died too early for Julian. I can't help but think that without Madame
Giry’s assistance, Erik would be looking at what he could have done
to Christine...and that is something quite frightening.
Gemma
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The
scene in the chapel was spectacular and I really enjoyed the Jewish wedding.
I'm really impressed! I am enjoying The Season of the Witch immensely. I've
arrived at Erik's indiscretion with Pascale. I must say that I was very interested,
but if she was blackmailing him (in a way), I can understand his motivations.
I think I prefer this book to The Return of the Phantom, but that
may be because we are dealing with established events rather than charting
new territory as such, though the action is definitely new. Pascale is a fascinating
character and I love the name. It'd be too easy to blame Erik for it all,
but if you step back and consider the situation (he was, after all, "under
the influence")...you can't blame him for anything except trying to protect
his family. Very clever! There was a line I had to laugh about, the one regarding
Erik trying to come back from being Raoul. It reminded me of you trying to
come back from being Erik. Well done!
A
friend
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I
finally finished Season! Maestro, it is simply superb! A magnifique composition
of lyrical prose and tempestuous action that leaves you wanting... nay, begging
for more! I loved your inclusion of Leroux as a character, a simply masterful
touch. You did so well! I am so very proud of you and all you have accomplished
in this book. You are a damn fine writer. I was a little sorry to see the
Daroga pass away, though. He was a great man.
G.K.S.
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Must
tell you how relieved I felt when Julian died. Almost glad that all his torments
and cruelties were over. Thank you that Erik did not have to kill him. That
worried me while reading the book...what would happen to Julian since there
was no place for him in their lives, especially not after what he had done.
I liked Julian when he was both good and bad, but when he was cruel, I disliked
his actions and felt sad for him. And, I don't feel Julian was responsible
for his actions, he did only what he was geared to do. That's why when his
life finally ended, I felt so relieved. And what a scene you wrote, father
and his son together trying to grapple with Julian’s short life and
what would never be…so sad.
Rosa
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There
are so many surprising parts to The Season of the Witch it’s difficult
to pin down which are my favorites. The unexpected events of fortune and misfortune,
the tormenting moments of anxiety, the unsettling feeling of loss and the
passion of love, the heights reached to the top of my imagination and the
acceptance of the realities of life. I took this book into my mind and my
heart and read it from the inside out. The result of doing so was beyond anything
I could ever fathom. Worth every penny I spent. One of my favorites was Michael
and Sarah's introduction to physical love. It produced an emotional connection
between the two that neither had expected. The description was beautiful and
enticing, breathtaking. The fulfillment of their act produced no negative
feelings of perversion at the time because I knew you were taking us somewhere
very deep and unexpected. Oh the tragedy of having Julian slip right through
their hands.
S.K.
in the Middle East
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I
thought the seance was wicked-awesome; you never cease to amaze me, Etienne.
You held my interest very well, could never tell what was going to happen
next to the characters. Best of all was that Erik in his early 70’s
was still so capable. I cracked up laughing when Julian noticed that Erik
dyed his hair, I just thought that was cute as could be. How in the world
do you keep coming up with these story lines, conversations, descriptions,
etc.? You’re a one of a kind person, one with extraordinary intellectual
powers and skills.
Phyllis
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This
book took me on one hell of a roller coaster ride of mood and feelings, which
is a very good thing, I think. Holy Carp-Canolies! I love it, I love the ending…both
of them! Including Leroux in the book was priceless and I think no other Phantom
author has EVER done that before. Very ingenious and I laughed my head off
because I could just see Erik doing that.
A
fan in the Southwest
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Beautifully
written, really, and gutsy. The story has substance and mystery and love that
amazes. I think you really hit the nail on the head in the way you write the
scenes. You don't make them pornographic, you make them real, something to
be longed for. Swoon-worthy. Please don’t listen to negative opinions
(they don’t have a brain in their heads) and keep writing. Your stories
have places of honor in my library and I’m giving them as Christmas
presents. Oh, and I laughed out loud when I read that little scene with Armand
and Sarah. The scene with everyone piling up on top of each other in the kitchen
was also hilarious. You handle everything so wonderfully: comedy, tragedy,
love, joy. What a hoot.
A
fan of the Phantom - J.F. in Arizona
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Dizzy.
I’m dizzy. This story captured my attention and took me everywhere.
I experienced a whole lifetime of birth, love, sorrow, hate, despair, jealousy,
and death all in one book. What an exceptional piece. You have to be proud.
That scene with Erik and the Daroga actually cutting into Julian so he could
breathe had me riveted to the page. Holy s__t!
Edith in New Jersey
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